“E” 3-19-2013
By John W. Vander Velden
The wind bit Paul’s exposed flesh. His face took the brunt, as he walked with
his hands thrust deep within his jacket’s pocket. Turning up his collar had not helped
much. A stocking hat would have been
nice, but for crying out loud it was supposed to be spring. And for that matter the car should have taken
him home. How could he know that the
fuel would run out the instant the needle touched the “E”. Paul had heard so many stories of people
driving hundreds…well maybe twenty miles all while they watched the gauge plummet
so far beneath the lowest dot, resting upon the peg until their car reached a
station selling cheap gas. No one ever
ran out of gas. It just didn’t
happen. But knowing his luck, Paul
shouldn’t have been surprised. To make
matters worse…if they could be worse…he had found himself at the side of some
country road in the middle of nowhere…if nowhere had a middle. Paul had politely knocked on the door of the
first house he reached. The lady there
was no help what-so-ever. She wouldn’t
even open the door. What was this world coming
to? Her voice wasn’t too clear as he
listened at the door. Something about “go
way” or “not today”. When Paul, certain
the lady of the house had been unable to hear of his problems, began
shouting. That resulted in “please don’t
hurt me” and “If you don’t leave I’ll call the police.” Sheesh, who calls them police these days. That was nearly forty minutes ago. It was still light then…well sorta’. Maybe he should have let her call the
police. Paul felt certain that cop cars
had heaters and right now he could use some heat.
So Paul walked on certain he was the
unluckiest kid in Donner County. Just as
he decided the situation could be worse…after all it could be raining…it began
raining…hard. Now this was ridiculous. Shortly after turning onto his own road, only
two miles remained, more or less, headlights came from behind. The old dark colored pickup pulled alongside. Paul looked down as the man rolled down the
window and shouted. “Get in.” Paul didn’t
argue. “What happened?” His father asked.
“Car trouble.” Paul’s answer.
“What broke?”
“The gas gauge….”
(388 Words)
Love it! Economy of language, good use of repetition and understated humor. Very "you"!
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